diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/issue-4971 b/changelog/unreleased/issue-4971
index 9ab529408..235d18cb5 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/issue-4971
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/issue-4971
@@ -1,9 +1,7 @@
 Bugfix: Fix unusable `mount` on macOS Sonoma
 
-On macOS Sonoma when using fuse-t, it was not possible to access files in
-a mounted repository.
-
-This issue has been resolved.
+On macOS Sonoma when using FUSE-T, it was not possible to access files in
+a mounted repository. This issue is now resolved.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/issues/4971
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/5048
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5003 b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5003
index d02b06bc7..f88ed3113 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/issue-5003
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/issue-5003
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-Bugfix: fix metadata errors during backup of removable disks on Windows
+Bugfix: Fix metadata errors during backup of removable disks on Windows
 
-Since restic 0.17.0, backups of removable disks on Windows could report
+Since restic 0.17.0, backing up removable disks on Windows could report
 errors with retrieving metadata like shown below.
 
 ```
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5096 b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5096
index d1e1d09b2..b1cc6edd3 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5096
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5096
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
-Enhancement: Allow prune dry-run without lock
+Enhancement: Allow `prune --dry-run` without lock
 
-The `prune --dry-run --no-lock` now allows performing a dry-run without
-taking a lock. If the repository is modified concurrently, `prune` may
-return inaccurate statistics or errors.
+The `prune --dry-run --no-lock` now allows performing a dry-run
+without locking the repository. Note that if the repository is
+modified concurrently, `prune` may return inaccurate statistics
+or errors.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/5096
diff --git a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5101 b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5101
index f784d0c47..4152eb185 100644
--- a/changelog/unreleased/pull-5101
+++ b/changelog/unreleased/pull-5101
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
-Bugfix: Do not retry load/list operation is SFTP connection is broken
+Bugfix: Do not retry load/list operation if SFTP connection is broken
 
-When using restic with the SFTP backend, backend operations that load
-a file or list files were retried even if the SFTP connection is broken.
-
-This has been fixed now.
+When using restic with the SFTP backend, backend operations that load a
+file or list files were retried even if the SFTP connection was broken.
+This has now been fixed.
 
 https://github.com/restic/restic/pull/5101
-https://forum.restic.net/t/restic-hanging-on-backup/8559/2
+https://forum.restic.net/t/restic-hanging-on-backup/8559