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# Managing Subnetworks
This is a short guide on how to manage NeoFS subnetworks. This guide
considers that side chain and inner ring (alphabet nodes) have already
been deployed and side chain contains deployed `subnet` contract.
considers that the sidechain and the inner ring (alphabet nodes) have already been
deployed, and the sidechain contains a deployed `subnet` contract.
## Prerequisites
- neo-go side chain RPC endpoint;
- neo-go sidechain RPC endpoint;
- latest released version of [neofs-adm](https://github.com/nspcc-dev/neofs-node/releases);
- [created](subnetwork-creation.md) subnetwork;
- wallet with account that owns the subnetwork;
- wallet with the account that owns the subnetwork;
- public key of the Storage Node;
- public keys of the node and client administrators;
- owner IDs of the NeoFS users.
## Add node administrator
Node administrators are the accounts that can manage (add and delete nodes)
whitelist of the nodes that could be included to the subnetwork. Only subnet
owner is allowed to add and remove node administrators from subnetwork.
Node administrators are accounts that can manage (add and delete nodes)
the whitelist of the nodes which can be included to a subnetwork. Only the subnet
owner is allowed to add and remove node administrators from the subnetwork.
```shell
$ neofs-adm morph subnet admin add \
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Adding a node to a subnetwork means that the node becomes able to service
containers that have been created in that subnetwork. Addition only changes
list of the allowed nodes. Node is not required to be bootstrapped at the
the list of the allowed nodes. Node is not required to be bootstrapped at the
moment of its inclusion.
```shell
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Add node request sent successfully.
```
**NOTE:** owner of the subnetwork is also allowed to add nodes.
**NOTE:** the owner of the subnetwork is also allowed to add nodes.
## Add client administrator
Client administrators are the accounts that can manage (add and delete
nodes) whitelist of the clients that can creates containers in the
subnetwork. Only subnet owner is allowed to add and remove client
administrators from subnetwork.
Client administrators are accounts that can manage (add and delete
nodes) the whitelist of the clients that can create containers in the
subnetwork. Only the subnet owner is allowed to add and remove client
administrators from the subnetwork.
```shell
$ neofs-adm morph subnet admin add \
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Add admin request sent successfully.
```
**NOTE:** you do not need to create group explicitly, it would be created
right after the first client admin has been added. Group ID is 4-byte
**NOTE:** you do not need to create a group explicitly, it will be created
right after the first client admin is added. Group ID is a 4-byte
positive integer number.
## Add client
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Add client request sent successfully.
```
**NOTE:** owner of the subnetwork is also allowed to add clients. This is
**NOTE:** the owner of the subnetwork is also allowed to add clients. This is
the only one command that accepts `ownerID`, not the public key.
Administrator can manage only his group (a group where that administrator
has been added by subnet owner).
Administrator can manage only their group (a group where that administrator
has been added by the subnet owner).
# Bootstrapping Storage Node
After subnetwork [creation](subnetwork-creation.md) and inclusion node to it, the
After a subnetwork [is created](subnetwork-creation.md) and a node is included into it, the
node could be bootstrapped and service subnetwork containers.
For bootstrapping you need to specify ID of the subnetwork in the node's
For bootstrapping, you need to specify the ID of the subnetwork in the node's
configuration:
```yaml
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**NOTE:** specifying subnetwork that is denied for the node is not an error:
that configuration value would be ignored. You do not need to specify zero
(with 0 ID) subnetwork: its inclusion is implicit. On the contrary, to exclude
node from the default zero subnetwork you need to specify it explicitly:
a node from the default zero subnetwork, you need to specify it explicitly:
```yaml
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# Creating container in non-zero subnetwork
Creating containers without using `--subnet` flag is equivalent to the
Creating containers without using `--subnet` flag is equivalent to
creating container in the zero subnetwork.
To create container in a private network your wallet must have been added to
the client whitelist by client admins or subnet owners:
To create a container in a private network, your wallet must be added to
the client whitelist by the client admins or the subnet owners:
```shell
$ neofs-cli container create \